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To improve an article, focus on rewriting it to eliminate passive voice, ensure factual accuracy, and enhance clarity. Organize the content into well-defined sections with clear headings. Aim for a word count of 900+ words for comprehensive coverage and better SEO.

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{“question”: “### Will the word count of my article change?”, “answer”: “Yes, the article will be expanded to over 900 words. This comprehensive approach aims to provide more in-depth coverage and potentially improve search engine optimization (SEO).”},
{“question”: “### How will the article be organized?”, “answer”: “The article will be split into four clear parts, each with its own heading. This structure is designed to make the content super easy to read and digest, guiding the reader through the information logically.”},
{“question”: “### What is the benefit of removing passive voice?”, “answer”: “Removing passive voice makes your writing more direct, concise, and engaging. Active voice clarifies who is performing the action, reducing ambiguity and creating a more impactful narrative.”},
{“question”: “### How do I submit my original text for improvement?”, “answer”: “You simply need to paste the original text into the designated area, and the rewriting process will begin.”},
{“question”: “### What are the key steps to improving an article?”, “answer”: “To improve an article, focus on rewriting it to eliminate passive voice, ensure factual accuracy, and enhance clarity. Organize the content into well-defined sections with clear headings, and aim for a comprehensive word count (e.g., 900+ words) for better SEO and thorough coverage.”}]

Tumi Makgale is a Cape Town-based journalist whose crisp reportage on the city’s booming green-tech scene is regularly featured in the Mail & Guardian and Daily Maverick. Born and raised in Gugulethu, she still spends Saturdays bargaining for snoek at the harbour with her gogo, a ritual that keeps her rooted in the rhythms of the Cape while she tracks the continent’s next clean-energy breakthroughs.

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